英语应用文写作

应 用 文 写 作

书信写作的五点要求：

１． 开门见山说意图。

２． 详细内容1、2、3

３． 不同内容要分段

４． 感谢祝愿不可少

５． 期盼回复成老套

学生真实范文：

Dear President:

I’m liming. I’m a student in Grade Three.

Today, I’m writing to you a letter, my dear, dear president. Our college has ten campuses,( but the same food in different campus) the food same, the price no same. The price is so black. Please tell me why different. The word on the menu too small to read. So we ask cooker what we eat today. At last, I love my university, I love you too. So I write you this letter.

No response, I’ll write again and again.

对比范文

Dear Mr.president,

My name is Liming. I am a junior

from the Chemical Science School. I write to talk about the canteen service on campus.

I am sorry to tell you that there are many problems in our school. firstly, the quality of our food in our school is very bad, while the price is very high. As a result, many students prefer to have a food out of school. secondly, though the service of our canteen is good, the environment of our canteen is very bad. Many students threw about food and rubbish everywhere the wanted. It is very disgusting for us to dine in such environment. thirdly, our canteen is too small to provide us with enough seats. So everyday we spent much time in waiting to be served, which is a waste of time for us.

Therefore, I think we should take some measures to deal with the problems. First, we

should try our best to improve the quality of the food. Second, we should take measures to make the price medium. Last, we should send some students to make sure that our canteen is clean.

I am sure our canteen will become better with our efforts. I am looking forward to seeing the change of our canteen.

Yours, Li Ming

1. 投诉信： express/air dissatisfaction/disappointment/concern regarding/concerning/as regards the canteen/library/bookstore

正文：第二段

1． 改写提纲一:2句

2． 改写提纲二:2句

3． 改写提纲三:2句

第三段：2句

1. 表示感谢：My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words; Words fail me when i wish to express my sincere gratitude to you; I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation for the kind assistance you render me.

2. 期待回信: I am looking forward to hearing from you soon; I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience; Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated. 正文写法小结：共写10句，首尾两段（4句话）是万能句。

落款：

1. 结尾客套：Yours sincerely,

2. 签名：Li Ming

The letter of Invitation

Dec 4 ,2011 th

Dear _____/To someone concerned,

I am delighted to learn that_____. Several years has passed since________. In my opinion,____________. On the one hand,________. On the other hand,_________.

As to the famous sites, I suggest_________________. It is not necessary for you to _____________. In addition,___________. I am sure__________________.

Please inform me _____________. I

am looking forward to seeing you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

stndrdthJan 1 2 3 4 , Feb Mar Apr May Jun Jul Aug Sep Oct Nov Dec

Li min

批评信模版

A letter of Complaint

Date____

Dear _____,

My name is __________. I am ___________. I venture to write you a letter about ----------. The focus of the complaint is __________. For one thing __________. For another____________________.

Honestly speaking,_________.

应用文写作之书信

----劝诫/鼓励朋友或同学

一．写作结构指导

开头：称呼

第一段：开门见山地说明写信的意图，即信的开头要交待的事由。

第二段：交代信中所反映的主要问题的看法和建议，不同内容可以分段。

第三段：表达美好祝愿，期待对方回信。

结尾：结束语和署名

二．常用句型

I am writing to share with you my opinion about it.

It’s quite natural/understandable for you

to do…, however,…u

From my point of view, you should never go to extremes.

I hope my advice can be of some help to you.

I wonder if you can take my suggestions into consideration.

I am looking forward to your good news.

三．优秀范文欣赏

2012年上海高考作文及范例

你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给12年六月八日

June 8, 2012

Dear Xu Haiqing,

You said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but

you couldn’t afford to buy the best brands. So you felt very depressed. There are different views on people’s wear. The following are my ideas about it.

Firstly, you shouldn’t put too much emphasis on physical appearance. You must always

remember the most important task for you today is to concentrate your attention on your studies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your examinations.

A famous saying goes, ―Frugality is the mother of virtue.‖ So, secondly, you must understand

that it is a fine virtue to learn live in frugality. Since your family is not able to provide you with enough money to buy clothes of the best brands, it is all the more necessary for you to try every means to lighten the financial burden of your family. You will find the virtue of frugality will benefit you a lot in your later life.

I hope you understand what I mean. I am sure you will take a positive attitude towards life

and will be happy again when you read my letter. (205 words)

Yours,

Huangping

四．实战练习

假设你是John，你的朋友Angela在数学学习上遇到一些困难，上课听不懂，课后作业也不能独立完成，几次考试都不及格，她很苦恼，感到自卑，甚至想辍学。请你给她写封信，谈谈你的看法和建议。

-------申请/ 自荐信

一． 写作结构指导

开头：称呼

第一段：介绍自己，开门见山地说明写信的意图，即信的开头要交待的事由。

第二段：阐明申请或自荐的原因、自己的优势或理由

第三段：表达美好祝愿，期待对方回信。

结尾：结束语和署名

二． 常用句型

I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in ....

I would like to write a letter to tell you that...

I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising…...

I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the one hand, .... On the other hand, .... I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.

I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview.

I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience

I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.

Best regards for your health and success.

三，高考作文点评

假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你

希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：

1．个人情况：年龄，性别，学历

2．个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况

3．承诺：提供最佳服务

注意：

1．词数100左右，开头语已为你写好

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3．生词：申请—apply (v.),application(n.)

志愿者—volunteer

Dear Sir / Madam:

My name is Lihua .I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.

思考：避免每句都用第一人称I开头；

内容要点

1.年龄、性别

2.学历及英语水平

3.爱好体育、熟悉本地

4.善于交往、乐于助人

5.承诺

6.合适的结尾

【同学范文1】第一档（很差）1-5分

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Lihua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.

I am an 18 girl. As a local people, I know the roads and Buildings very clear. I like sports very much. By several years training, I am almost good at every sports.

Now I am a student. In school, my English is good, I am also a Kind girl. When I know someone is in difficulty, I will give him or her to defeat it.

The Games will be held in the city where I am live. I would like to a volunteer, if the dream comes true, I will try my best to improve the level of my service.

As a volunteer is my gloary. I wish I can become one.

Best wishes for you.

点评：~~~

【同学范文2】第二档（较差）5-10分

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Lihua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.

I am a 17 years old girl. And I am a senior 2 students in NO.1 Senior School of ╳╳. My English is good and I am good at PE.I like to do things for others. Because I think helping others is helping myself. When someone has difficult in doing things, I am always ready to help him. And I like to communication is the bridge of the world. Because the world is a big family.

I hear that the Games will be held in this place where I lives. I hope to be a volunteer. Because by this, I can lean about the world and take exercise. I can provide the best service for the Games. I know the situation here. I believe I can do well.

点评：要点安排混乱，部分要点理解错误；拼写、语法错误较多，部分句型结构有问题；

【同学范文3】第三档（适当）11-15分

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Lihua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. I am a brave boy of 16 years old. I can speak English fluently. Besides, I do well in getting on well(用词重复) with other students. I am glad to help others. I know all interesting places here. If I become a member of volunteers, I will try my best to introduce my hometown to visitors. I will take them to taste all kinds of food and let them know our Chinese culture. I am sure that none of them would leave feeling disappointed. （这部分不错）On the other hand, I wish the Games

had a happy end.

I apply for being a volunteer, I hope you can allow me to be a volunteer. I will do well in it and it and try my best to work. Thank you.

点评：缺少部分要点，如爱好体育、熟悉本地、善于交往、乐于助人等；承诺部分比较精彩。

【同学范文4】第四档（好）16-20分

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Lihua,I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Acian Games.

I am a warm-hearted boy of 17, who is still studying in Middle School. I want to be a member of them.

English is what I am good at, as well as sports. I have no difficulty in communicating with foreigner, because I can speak English fluently and do well in communication. It is my duty to help others and as a local one, I know quite well about our district. If I am a volunteer, I will try my best to serve others. For me, a volunteer is not only a glorious job, but a good way to get close to sports. If I can be one of the members, I will be very happy and honorable.

Please accept my application for being a volunteer, and I have been ready to make contribution to the Games.

点评：能通过使用多变的句式和高级的词组增强文章表现力，英语功底比较扎实。

【同学范文5】第五档（很好）21-25分

My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. I’m a boy of 17 years old and right now I’m studying in the ╳╳ No. 2 Senior High School.

There are several reasons why I want to apply. First of all, I take great interest in sports and do well in English, especially spoken English. This can help me communicate with foreigners smoothly. Secondly, I’m very familiar with our city. And it’s quite easy for me to show the way to strangers. Most important of all, I like to make friends with people and try my best to help them. If I can become a volunteer, I promise that I’ll provide the best